Having spoken to a friend of mine who did English Lit. at Uni and received very helpful comments I will be making some edits to my piece of prose in due course.
I am also doing a bit of fun writing which I won’t put up for reading. Having received my new colouring book “Magical Jungle” I shall be making some inroads to that as well.
Seeing as I didn’t sleep well last night a nice siesta is in order!